ooookay
Alright well I like the general premise, it's pretty funny, but a few things to think about. 1, slow the dialog down a bit, I'm a fast reaser and it was kinda hard to keep up with. 2, you might wanna consider adding music or sound effects, otherwise it just seems bland, and 3, maybe make the next one just a touch longer, it seemed like it was over far too quickly.